So much to tell you

so much to tell you.	20.11.15	one more day till the end of the term.Everyone packing for the holidays.kate staying with sophie for the first day of the holidays not knowing the city he is going to very well.Feeling so sad.When his mother gave him his address is was not happy but then when his mum gave him the address he was shocked.A new wallpaper in his house just noticing.Finally writing back to cathy just getting out of the hospital.Her first time communicating with people for a long time.
so much to tell you	22.11.15	Writing to mrs lindell because she is the only person he can talk to. She in prep. Cathy's mother was with her. Cathy introduce her to her mother. Lisa was in the dorm and asked if she need anything. She felt pleased and shared a tear. The last few days of holidays we horrible. It was good to get away from her step father and mother for the past days of the holidays. She doesn't think she wants to go see her father anymore. She read this news in the newspaper, and felt like spewing

Levelling sheet by Jose and I

levelling sheet by Jose & I

Element	Rubric	Comment
Ideas	5	This person had good ideas.
Structure and Language	5	To be honest this person should have used different and stronger words so the writing can be more alive to not make the reader bored.
Organisation	6	Your paragraphs didn't need changing and they were good basic paragraphs.
Vocabulary	5	Use different words than baby words. Good starting though
Sentence Structure	5	They were good basic sentence to explain what happened.
Punctuation	5	Found a few mistakes
Spelling	6	Found no spelling mistakes

Recount

Well the day has come there mum and dad and  brother’s and sister's packed their car there off.Yay peanut butter  yelled running out to the car with her hands full of bags and more bags.They are finally going camping down taupo.I couldn't wait.

A few hours had passed by where in Taupo said peanut butter.She just couldn't wait to get into the water.Peanut butter and her sister Ricki ran striaght for the ice cold  water as soon as her dad stop the car.Want a race Ricki ready set go.Shame I bet you I said to her.Well Peanut butter and Ricki ran out of the car scremming her other brother’s and sister’s come out as slow as a snail and still half asleep from the trip down.Man you’s are so lazy we are at a place with a lake and all you’s wanna do is sleep.You’s had almost an 8hour sleep down bro.

Her brother’s and sister’s had looked like they had never been there before everyone was looking at them like do those kids ever get out of their house because it doesn't look like they do.Peanut butter seen some other kids playing where we were swimming so she went over and ask them if they wanted to come play with us.They said yes we played a lot of fun games.Peanut butter favorite game they played was rugby because they got to tackle people over and wouldn't get into trouble if they cried.They said they had so much fun and wanted to keep playing but they had to go. “Where do yous have to go,”

“to see our papa” they all replied.

They all said they goodbye’s to there papa.But they will see him next year.Sitting their in silents peanut butters family made no sound at all  bringing back some memories of there grandad and what he had done for them.It was’t the happyies moment of there life but they love seeing there grandad.

Peanut butters family and her had a good laugh and a bit of teers at some of the things that her crazy but lovely family had done today but we all enjoyed it.Peanut butters dad said that they would come down every year now well try to anyway.So her family made it there new tradition coming to taupo every year and meet up with some of their family and speeding time with them too.

By Arihia

A time with whanau

Recount

Well the day has come there mum and dad and  brother’s and sister's packed their car there off.Yay peanut butter  yelled running out to the car with her hands full of bags and more bags.They are finally going camping down taupo.I couldn't wait.

A few hours had passed by where in Taupo said peanut butter.She just couldn't wait to get into the water.Peanut butter and her sister Ricki ran striaght for the ice cold  water as soon as her dad stop the car.Want a race Ricki ready set go.Shame I bet you I said to her.Well Peanut butter and Ricki ran out of the car scremming her other brother’s and sister’s come out as slow as a snail and still half asleep from the trip down.Man you’s are so lazy we are at a place with a lake and all you’s wanna do is sleep.You’s had almost an 8hour sleep down bro.

Her brother’s and sister’s had looked like they had never been there before everyone was looking at them like do those kids ever get out of their house because it doesn't look like they do.Peanut butter seen some other kids playing where we were swimming so she went over and ask them if they wanted to come play with us.They said yes we played a lot of fun games.Peanut butter favorite game they played was rugby because they got to tackle people over and wouldn't get into trouble if they cried.They said they had so much fun and wanted to keep playing but they had to go. “Where do yous have to go,”

“to see our papa” they all replied.

They all said they goodbye’s to there papa.But they will see him next year.Sitting their in silents peanut butters family made no sound at all  bringing back some memories of there grandad and what he had done for them.It was’t the happyies moment of there life but they love seeing there grandad.

Peanut butters family and her had a good laugh and a bit of teers at some of the things that her crazy but lovely family had done today but we all enjoyed it.Peanut butters dad said that they would come down every year now well try to anyway.So her family made it there new tradition coming to taupo every year and meet up with some of their family and speeding time with them too.

By Arihia

Gloss test

Should of went to one sight

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This is my planning sheet.For mine and Ngarangi animation project.We choose racing When a racer in running and a car comes and crashes into him.Our advert was should of went to one sight and got your eyes checked.Our first photo is the background of our photo.Secound one is about them starting the race.Third one is about the car crash and the person that is driving has bad eyesight and needs to go to one sight.Four is about the man that died and should of went to one sight.
   WALT: create a 30 second advert.
SC Create a 300 photo shot advert. I or 2 close-up shots on your character - portrait or close-up on facial shot Audience must know what you are advertising. Image and slogan must be provided. Movements of character or characters must be fluid, slower, more body movements shown. Add Title at the beginning and credits at the end. Don’t forget the music that reflects your mood for your advert. My reflection. The thing that I did well were our planning, videoing, teamwork on planning and painting, creating our sense, and building our people and props. The learning that took place was how to work wevideo and stop motion.And move the thing without anything getting in the way.Things that i could do better on is help out more on our work.Add a bit more detail and things to our sense.

Toku mihi me pepeha