Should of went to one sight

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This is my planning sheet.For mine and Ngarangi animation project.We choose racing When a racer in running and a car comes and crashes into him.Our advert was should of went to one sight and got your eyes checked.Our first photo is the background of our photo.Secound one is about them starting the race.Third one is about the car crash and the person that is driving has bad eyesight and needs to go to one sight.Four is about the man that died and should of went to one sight.
   WALT: create a 30 second advert.
SC Create a 300 photo shot advert. I or 2 close-up shots on your character - portrait or close-up on facial shot Audience must know what you are advertising. Image and slogan must be provided. Movements of character or characters must be fluid, slower, more body movements shown. Add Title at the beginning and credits at the end. Don’t forget the music that reflects your mood for your advert. My reflection. The thing that I did well were our planning, videoing, teamwork on planning and painting, creating our sense, and building our people and props. The learning that took place was how to work wevideo and stop motion.And move the thing without anything getting in the way.Things that i could do better on is help out more on our work.Add a bit more detail and things to our sense.